Long post ahead, but I do hope that you read it all. Many of you know I'm not the biggest fan of the Hobbit trilogy in its current form, but I wanted to sit down and give Peter Jackson one last chance to redeem himself with the Battle of Five Armies Extended Edition. I've heard mixed opinions on the EE...some are happy to have what they feel should have been the TE, and others are still upset that more scenes weren't included. I tried going into this with an open mind, and did my best not to watch the film and think about which new scenes I would/wouldn't include in my Hobbit fan edit later this month. So! With all that being said, here's how I feel about the BOFA EE.
It sucks. Maybe some of you are happy with it, but for the life of me I cannot fathom how anyone thinks this is a good film. The theatrical version was already violently incoherent, and almost fully devoid of Tolkien's spirit. This extended version is even MORE violent and only slightly less incoherent. There were such high hopes that PJ & Co would fix all the plot holes and unresolved arcs with the EE, and those hopes have been dashed in favor of tasteless blood and gore. I've followed SO many speculative posts over this past year on TORN, with everyone weighing in on the awesome new footage we'd hope to see in the EE. We even tried estimating how much time each new scene would be given. Maybe 2-3 minutes for the Bilbo/Bofur scene, a meaty 4-5 minutes for the funeral and coronation, at least 1-2 minutes of Beorn tearing it up on the battlefield, proper conclusions for Bard and Thranduil. Yeah. Almost all of those estimates were way off. The funeral was largely disappointing for me, and there was no coronation...Dain nods his head and that's it. Better than nothing, I guess. Beorn got maybe 5-6 SECONDS of new footage, and is now officially the most shafted Tolkien character in this trilogy. But hey, we did get that nice scene with Bofur and Bilbo, right? Doesn't that excuse all the other shortcomings? No, it does not. Which leads me to the other 90% of new footage. Violence, blood, guts, dismemberment, decapitations and so on. Oh, and more Alfrid. None of which actually moves the story forward. The last thing that BOFA needed was more violence for the sake of it. The man who brought us the LOTR films is not the same man who gave us these Hobbit films. Peter Jackson is clearly more interested in playing with his computer sandbox at WETA than actually delivering a satisfying story on film. Don't blame the studio on allegedly withholding the additional 10 minutes of footage we were "promised." Don't hold out hope for a non-existent Super Extended Mega Mithril Edition. Will that honestly make this film THAT much better? The version of the Hobbit you are hoping to see does not exist. A few extra minutes of footage will not save it now. I am now more convinced than ever that the only way I'll ever enjoy The Hobbit films is to watch a completely re-edited version of them. Without all the excess bloat and over-the-top violence that has ignored the charm and spirit of J.R.R. Tolkien's sublime little fantasy novel. I can only do so much with the footage available to work with, but I can assure you with all bias aside that there is a much better Hobbit film beneath the three films we've been given. And the nice part is that I'm only one of several people working on a fan edit of the Hobbit...so if you don't like the changes I've made than I'm sure you'll find another version that might suit your liking! This was the last time I'll ever watch PJ's Hobbit films in their original form. From here on out I'm watching J.R.R. Tolkien's The Hobbit.
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Peter
11/2/2015 08:35:27 pm
Hi Dustin, I can't tell you how much I agree with you about the EE edition of BOFA. It was a bad theatrical version, and a bad extended edition...
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Dustin
11/3/2015 08:06:26 am
Thanks Peter, it was a very disappointing Extended Edition for sure. I will be including a number of new scenes from the EE, but for the most part I will ignore the extra material. Too much violence and too little story/character development.
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Peter
11/3/2015 12:30:01 pm
As I said Dustin, I'm very excited to see what you'll be able to salvage out of what could have been a great representation of the The Hobbit... I guess I'm curious as to weather or not you will start the battle the way the EE edition is, or the way the theatrical version was?
Nicolae Andrei
11/3/2015 02:48:13 pm
Me and a bunch of friends are preparing to do a middle earth marathon and we are basically waiting for your blu-ray final edit, which includes 1080p and DTS 5.1 sound. I have my own private small cinema and whilst there are portions that I enjoyed from the Hobbit, I believe that the original trilogy is overly bloated for no reason. As such, for me at least, your version will be the definite final edition of The Hobbit. So please, take your time and do it proper (as you usually do). Oh, and for the love of God, please remove the 15 minute break black screen from the middle of the movie...we have pause buttons now. Also, I don't know if you want to or not, but could you keep the original Hobbit logo that appears in the movie? It looks more like solid gold and better detailed, compared to the 2D logo you have used (I also like your logo too, just not as much).
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Dustin
11/3/2015 07:14:32 pm
Wow that's awesome to hear! I will be releasing the digital HD version first, and the Bluray version will come soon after that. It will be a two-disc set, so that means two very large ISO files to download. More details on that to come though.
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Allan
11/7/2015 07:44:08 am
It's the first I've heard about the 'intermission' and have to say I really like the idea. The break was always welcome while watching classic epics and I like seeing that transferred onto bluray as it was always part of the cinema experience, I'm nostalgic that way! Also the idea of having the break where the first film would have ended had it been in two parts is pretty cool. A welcome break to open another bottle of red...
Sandro
11/7/2015 01:07:03 pm
I am also a proponent of having the 2-minute intermission. True, we have pause buttons but we also have fast forward buttons. I myself think that this is the right point of the film to take a break. It's the moment at which I would stand up from my seat to stretch my legs and. Also: some people prefer to watch this as two separate movies, as originally intended for The Hobbit.
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Hi Dustin! I´m loging for your version!! I edited a spanish version in order to enjoy the movie in my language but I´m also excited about yours. Three litlle questions and one advice (if I may):
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Dustin
11/4/2015 06:17:11 am
Hi Jaime, thanks for the link. I have seen another fan edit that inserted Erebor flashbacks during the Misty Mountains song, and thought it was pretty cool. I'm not really sure I'd want to include it in my fan edit however, just because I'd like to keep The Lonely Mountain offscreen until the company actually reaches it in the film.
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Dave
11/4/2015 08:51:44 am
Hi Dustin, I'm a big fan of your work and totally have faith your fan edit will be the best version of the Hobbit that we deserve!
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Dustin
11/4/2015 10:23:40 am
Hi Dave, I am pretty set against using most of the EE battle footage. Especially the beginning where we see dwarves and elves killing each other. It didn't happen in the book and serves no purpose in the film.
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Jeremy
1/18/2016 08:32:10 pm
Hi. Actually, it does happen in the book. "bows twang and their arrows begin to whistle" -- the dwarves and elves do just begin fighting before being interrupted
Dave
11/4/2015 11:29:22 am
I'm just wondering if it seems a little abrupt to all of a sudden have the crew at Ravenhill when its so far away and orcs are clearly all around thorin when he says that. I'm not trying to tell you how to do your edit, but I am wondering if you feel there is a continuity issue with that transition and if you use some (not all) of the cart scene maybe at the beginning, it can help with the transition of Erebor to Ravenhill. Again, its your edit, you can do what you want. Just thought I'd bring up a possible issue!
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Dustin
11/4/2015 12:43:02 pm
Thanks Dave, feel free to check out the April 2015 version of my fan edit on the Downloads page, so you can see how I approached that sequence. It hasn't really bugged me and I'd rather not add 2-3 minutes of superfluous CGI action just to show exactly how they get to Ravenhill.
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Will
11/4/2015 11:29:50 am
Couldn't agree more, Dustin. I'm actually more excited for your edit than I was to see ROTK in cinemas 12 years ago. I can't wait to marathon your edit alongside Peter Jackson's LOTR trilogy.
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Dustin
11/4/2015 12:44:38 pm
That's great to hear! I will be making a separate post about my planned edits for the BOFA EE soon. I doubt that I'll include the Mirkwood EE stuff though...it really slows the pace of the film down and adds very little to the story.
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Will
11/4/2015 01:21:51 pm
I think the river scene is a really good nod to the book, allows for a bit of comic relief, and gives Bilbo more screen time (at the end of the day, more Martin Freeman is never a bad thing). However, you could make a few cuts as the scene does go on for about 4-5 minutes.
Sandro
11/4/2015 12:08:45 pm
I agree with you completely Dustin. When I saw The Battle of the Five Armies in theaters I already knew there was something really off about it. I maintained that it was still a fun film, but now I've really come to realise that the movie as a whole is actually flawed. It has some wonderful scenes for sure... But the extended edition once again proves that there isn't much to improve upon.
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Will
11/4/2015 12:44:22 pm
I believe Dustin has mentioned that he intends to completely remove Alfrid after Smaug's death (hooray!). So we're left to assume that he dies at the same time as The Master.
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Dustin
11/6/2015 01:27:34 pm
Yes I'll probably re-insert that shot of Alfrid getting kicked off the boat, since it's only a few seconds.
Dustin
11/4/2015 12:53:29 pm
I just went through the shores of Laketown footage last night, to see if I could pull Alfrid out completely. I don't think it will be possible. The way the scene is structured and paced makes it extremely difficult to avoid Alfrid. This is a nagging issue for me and I'd like to solve it, but we might just have to deal with a bit of Alfrid after Smaug's attack.
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Will
11/6/2015 12:25:46 pm
For the sake of continuity, would you consider including the scene where The Master kicks Alfrid off the boat, just to show how he's still alive after Smaug's attack?
Sandro
11/4/2015 12:29:51 pm
Oh, and one other question about the funeral scene. I myself would suggest including it as a whole since the last thing it needs to be is shorter. It's also nice to see Beorn one last time. Then again, you did go out of your way to delete Radagast from the picture. So how are you going to fix that? He does look a bit like a dwarf, so he could easily be just an extra who people will overlook. Also, since he is present in your Durin's folk companion film... it's not that bad to acknowledge in this movie he exists.
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Dave
11/4/2015 03:40:55 pm
Dustin. I've researched the scene and, to be honest, I have completed faith in your editing and story telling skills as a movie editor that whatever you decide, even if its not every little thing everyone wants, will end up being the best version of the Hobbit there can be!! Best wishes to you as you head towards your Dec. 1st release date. I'm so excited for it!!
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Sam
11/4/2015 10:05:20 pm
Hi Dustin. Huge fan of your work and I have no doubt your final edition will be awesome!! That being said, after watching your edit, I have one minor continuity concern that maybe you can explain for me.
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Dustin
11/5/2015 07:46:26 am
Thanks Sam, you may remember in the original film that Azog knocks Thorin on the ice and inexplicably sends a video-game style wave of orcs to finish him off. I cut this part because like I said, it feels like a video game, and it cheapens Azog's desire to fight/kill Thorin personally.
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Will
11/5/2015 11:03:38 am
I think you could include a little more of the Thorin/Azog fight showing Azog knocking Thorin onto the ice, intercutting it with the other material you have already (the bats attacking, Bilbo and Dwalin fighting the Orcs). But cut out the rest of the orcs that appear out of nowhere. You could still have Thorin the two orcs that attack him in the stone structure, assuming that they're some of Azog's orcs that were present when he killed Fili, and that those orcs attack Thorin out of their own volition.
Sandro
11/5/2015 12:52:47 pm
That is actually a really good point I never thought about: the idea that Azog using henchmen cheapens the idea of him trying to kill Thorin personally. Still, like Sam said: there is the small continuity issue of Thorin and Azog being far apart and staring each other down spaghetti Western-style for no reason. It's also weird to see all those dead orcs on the ice, since there's really no one around to have killed them. Maybe this could be solved the following way:
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Sam
11/5/2015 01:29:16 pm
In the end, I think if Dustin wouldn't mind working on seeing if he could make it work somewhat better for continuity reasons, that would be great. But if Dustin feels like it would make the film worse off, then I'd say we should just trust Dustin to make it the best way he sees fit!
Will
11/5/2015 03:18:23 pm
I think the way you've laid it sounds really good. I guess the only way we'll be able to find out if it works is if Dustin tries it out himself and uploads it here for feedback.
Trevor
11/5/2015 08:39:15 am
Completely agree with your last comment Dustin. Overall I feel PJ made his action scenes waayyy too much like a video game. I love how you've been able to take out the "lucky falling" from most of the action scenes but have still kept some of the realistic battle moments from those scenes (ex. Goblin tunnels, barrel chase, inside Erebor) it keeps the action but removes the stupidity, a true sign of Superior editing on your part.
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Dustin
11/5/2015 08:44:48 am
Thanks, I do plan on trying to work Beorn's EE intro into my side quest edit. The Mirkwood river scene wouldn't make sense because we're following Gandalf at that point!
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Trevor
11/5/2015 10:38:59 am
That sounds awesome Dustin! I feel like your side quest allows for scenes that are nice and everything, but would slow down the pace of the Hobbit main film. This way, all the scenes are there in a much more cohesive way and its more enjoyable all the way around! I must say, your version of the main film, side quest, trailor, one minute gag reel, and menu with subtitles (hopefully!) Will be the definitive Hobbit edition I've been hoping for since they announced they would be made. Thanks so much for your hard work and dedication that many fans, movies and book fans alike, will now treasure forever!!
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Nathan
11/5/2015 03:57:56 pm
Dustin. I believe that the clip of the Azog vs Thorin showdown that's on the Facebook page has Thorin falling down from the rocks, then it cuts to Dwalin and Bilbo, then when it comes back, Thorin and Azog have their showdown. Since Thorin falls from the rocks, he's separate from Azog, so when we come back to them, it seems to explain why they are separate. Not sure if you would want to do this scene that way again, but its the video from the Facebook page if you think its better that way. You did both edits so it s up to you lol. Love your work btw
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Jacob
11/6/2015 11:16:56 am
Hi Dustin. This is more a question about DOS, but is there a reason given for why Bard is arrested? Or is it simply because the master doesn't like him and he is a trouble maker? Not sure of this is a consistency issue with your edit or the source. I'd like to know!
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Dustin
11/6/2015 11:46:31 am
Yeah, Bard's story line is very tricky actually. I think I need to re-insert the first scene with the Master and Alfrid talking about Bard being a troublemaker, otherwise there's not enough context for why he is arrested.
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Jacob
11/6/2015 12:51:34 pm
I think you need to keep the Bard being arrested arc. I think I'm putting either that first scene, the extra scene from DOS EE or a mixture of the two where Alfird and the master discuss arresting Bard. Try to keep Alfrid out as much as possible if you can tho lol
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Dustin
11/6/2015 01:29:55 pm
Alfrid will appear in the film for the absolute minimum amount of time needed to have the story make sense! I don't mind adding the scene with him and the Master back in.
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George
11/6/2015 03:43:15 pm
Dustin, I believe the fight with azog and thorin (someone else mentioned this) used to be edited differently than your final version which had thorin fall off the rocks and then the scene cut like in this edit of yours
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Dustin
11/8/2015 07:29:41 am
I have since added a few extra seconds of Thorin and Azog fighting, yes.
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George
11/9/2015 06:21:25 pm
Do you think the extra fighting scences help the movie more, or did you like your initial edit more? Are you OK with how it transitions to Thorin and Azog staring at each other for a final showdown? Just wondering! Love what you've done!
Dustin
11/9/2015 06:44:21 pm
It was nice to have some more dwarf-related battle shots to work with. There should have been way more Beorn than what we got in the EE, so I'm still not happy about that. Overall I think the battle flows better with the extra 1-2 minutes of footage I've added in. The Thorin/Azog showdown works just fine for me!
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Dante
11/7/2015 01:32:12 pm
I cannot agree with you enough, Dustin. I also cannot wait for the full release, and have been preparing for it by buying blank DVDs for it alone. I hope you are still planning on a DVD ISO release alongside the bluray.
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Dustin
11/8/2015 07:31:02 am
Yep, DVD ISO is still on the menu! Make you have dual-layer DVDs by the way. It will be a two-disc set. More info on that soon.
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Adam
11/8/2015 04:39:41 am
Dustin, whats did you think about the funeral scene? Too short or just right? have you seen the clips of Gandalfs eulogy at all? Maybe you could use his voice over to lengthen the funeral scene...
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Dustin
11/8/2015 07:35:04 am
I liked the funeral scene...not as good or long as I had expected it to be but still baffling that it was cut from the theatrical version. I am planning to insert Gandalf's eulogy into the finished sequence, yes! But the overall length will still be the same.
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Fuzz
11/11/2015 12:53:17 pm
Might I recommend adding the deleted scene of Bilbo planting the acorn if you've seen it? I really don't like Bard's speech (very hammy), but I do quite like Bilbo in it. Perhaps Bard's bit could be edited out, so it just looks like him and Gandalf are despairing and that prompts Bilbo to plant the acorn?
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Dustin
11/11/2015 04:45:13 pm
I have seen the acorn planting scene. It's just a bit too preachy and hammy all around. I feel like they were trying to mimic Sam's speech at the end of Two Towers but it came off wrong. I can see why they decided to cut it, so I will probably leave it out of my fan edit.
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Fuzz
11/12/2015 10:11:24 am
Fair enough, though if you're wavering, count me as a vote that would like to see more Bilbo!
Nicolas
11/12/2015 09:52:22 am
I think the Extended Edition still has some few scenes worth of being included in your final edit. This is my opinion,
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Dustin
11/12/2015 10:13:53 am
I agree almost 100% with your post. Just about everything you've listed is how I am approaching the EE!
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Ryan
11/25/2015 09:20:22 am
Personally, I would also keep the fight between the dwarves and the elves at the start of the battle. I know it doesn't add anything story-wise, but it was very cool. When I was watching BOFA in cinemas, I was really looking forward to seeing the dwarves and elves face off. And when it didn't happen I was a bit disappointed, so I was glad to see it in the EE. There is also another scene where the elves launch a volley of arrows onto the orcs, which was very cool too. So, I would like to see both of those in J.R.R. Tolkien's The Hobbit.
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Gabriel Miller
11/13/2015 10:19:34 pm
Hey! I have seen a few edits of these movies and have to say that this one is for sure the best. Along with others, I agree that more scenes of the BOFA could be added, but I would suggest two altercations. I personally cannot stand Dain. I know his character is important but the CGI is just silly looking to me. I think the movie could go without him. Also, the battle between Azog and Thorin on the ice is pretty strange. I have mentally compiled parts of the fight between those two into a more coherent less weird fight scene that I think could be edited to flow smoothly. If anyone can do it, I know you can. Just some suggestions.
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Eric P.
11/29/2015 11:02:06 am
Dustin,
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Dustin
11/29/2015 12:34:08 pm
Hi Eric, I watched that deleted Beorn sequence and there is absolutely no way I can use it. The animation is a rough pre-viz...the effects are on par with an advanced N64 game. Plus there are no finished sound effects. I'm sorry but that's just impossible for me to do.
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Eric P.
11/29/2015 01:24:49 pm
Dustin,
Dustin
11/29/2015 04:24:30 pm
It's OK. The Hobbit films were hamstrung from the beginning for a variety of reasons, and I don't think it's fair to blame Peter Jackson directly for a lot of things. He was put under tremendous time constraints by the studios and everything just boiled over when they decided to make a trilogy. To me, the single character that suffered the most from the production troubles was Beorn. From what I've read and heard rumors of, he had a much larger role in the film(s) before they decided to expand Legolas further. When you come down to it, Beorn's only real contribution to the entire plot in the films is that he lets the dwarves borrow his ponies until they reach Mirkwood. That's it.
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Eric P.
11/29/2015 08:58:22 pm
Dustin,
Alex
3/3/2016 04:48:33 am
Thanks for all of your hard work on the final HD edit, Dustin. JRR Tolkein's The Hobbit is one I will watch over and over again and will introduce my kids to when they're older. I've donated fifty bucks via paypal - hope it helps! Cheers, Alex
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Dustin
3/7/2016 11:53:56 am
Wow, thank you Alex! That really means a lot to me!
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